10 tips for DIY press release writing

Discussion in 'Sales & Marketing' started by Carbon Neutral Copy, Mar 10, 2008.

  1. Carbon Neutral Copy New Member

    Some businesses choose to hire an agency or PR consultant to manage their media relations activity, but for people who simply don't have the budget to pay a professional, here are ten tips for writing your own press release…

    1. Research your target media – buy and read copies of the magazines, newspapers and trade titles you want to target to get a feel for the kind of stories they cover.

    2. Think about your target audience – who are they, what are their likes and interests and why would they care about what you have to say? (Think WIFFM – what’s in it for me? – with the ‘me’ being your target audience).

    3. Make it newsworthy – think about what you want to say and how you can make it as interesting, timely, newsworthy and relevant as possible to your target audience. Keep up-to-date on national, local and industry news and look for opportunities to ‘piggy-back’ on a key issue relating to your business (such as the obesity ‘epidemic’ if you’re about to open a new gym or launch a new healthy eating range of snacks).

    4. Remember the five Ws – make sure the opening paragraph of your press release contains the who, what, why, when and where (the five Ws) and the how of your story. It needs to be clear and concise and compelling enough for the journalist to want to read on.

    5. Avoid self-promotion at all costs – a common mistake people make with DIY press release writing is sending out a page of sales copy. Don’t do this; your press release will just end up in the bin.

    6. Be concise – there’s nothing worse for a journalist than page after page of press release waffle! Stick to the basic facts of your story as a journalist can always contact you for additional information if necessary.

    7. Say it with words and pictures – sometimes the visual side of your story can have the same or greater impact than the words, so you may wish to commission a photographer to capture your story. If you’re taking the pictures yourself, make sure they are of high enough quality to be used in print. And remember: NEVER send unsolicited attachments, including pictures, via email to a journalist. Simply include a ‘Note to editors’ section at the bottom of your press release saying that photography is available on request.

    8. Add your contact details – sounds obvious but so many people forget this one! Provide as many ways as possible for a journalist to contact you for further information about your story/business. Include both landline and mobile numbers if you have them, an email address and your website address.

    9. Check for errors – do proofread your press release before sending it to make sure it is devoid of any embarrassing mistakes. If you have written it, you are much more likely to read what you expect to see rather than what is actually on the page so if you can, ask someone else to check it over for you as well.

    10. Manage your expectations – writing and sending a press release does not in itself guarantee coverage in your target publication(s). If the promise of column inches is what you’re after, pay for an advert. That said, if you follow these tips on writing a press release, you should stand a better chance of it being picked up.

    Good luck! :D

    Vicky
  2. fee New Member

    Thanks vicky, that was most useful.:biggrin:

    im just trying to write one for "international turn off tv week " in April...........(((groan)))
  3. RayB A1 Super Mod

    Excellent article - I've stickied it :001_smile:
  4. Fuzzy registered member

    Thanks Vic:hug:xx
  5. Calibre Designs New Member

    Excellent work Vicky....

    With your busy schedule, you still have time for this.

    I bet no forum appreciates it more than us :)
  6. Carbon Neutral Copy New Member

    My pleasure. Glad it's been useful to some of you :D

    Vicky
  7. RayB A1 Super Mod

    Vicky - I need a press release for A1 - would you like the job? :wink:
  8. Carbon Neutral Copy New Member

    You mean my top ten tips didn't inspire you to write your own :eek1:?

    :D Vicky
  9. RayB A1 Super Mod


    It's time I'm lacking, not inspiration :lol: This place is keeping me busy :001_tongue:
  10. stephendoyle New Member

    hi vicky,

    cracking post really good advice.

    regards
    steve doyle
  11. sally New Member

    That's a stunner Vicky, as you can see from all the thanks, again thank you what a terrific read.
  12. Alex Upstream New Member

    Excellent article. I think proofreading is particularly important - it's amazing how much copy makes it into the public domain with typos.


    It is a drag after spending hours writing something to go through it all again, but is SO important.
  13. self-sale New Member

    Excellent advice, thanks
  14. King_McFadden New Member

    Great advice - inspired me to get writing.
  15. Rhyemba New Member

  16. Lasting Designs New Member

    You could also add;

    For a multi-agency approach, you should send the emails individually, because newspapers like to get the exclusive. If you choose to block send the release each will/can pass up on your article as the "other side" can do it. It also has the added benefit that if your article is really interesting, you press release can grow into a feature. And don't forget to reward the publishers with something (say a bottle of wine or a vouchure for your business), they do remember the sender of a gift, so make them your friends rather than just a contact.
  17. Vicky,

    Thanks for that excellent post.

    Very useful indeed.

    Thanks again.

    Mark
  18. Mark Nagurski New Member

    Great stuff in there Vicky.

    What is your take on direct-to-consumer news releases? i.e. writing keyword-friendly releases designed to be read by the end-user and found via search engines.

    Also, any specific advice for pitching bloggers with releases? What would you do differently?
  19. journey08 New Member

    Nice article Vicky. I find it interesting and informative to read.
    Great tips and following them will make your press release successful.
  20. alocalseo New Member

    I agree with Arleigh here. This is my first post here and I am glad to say thank you for a well written article. I like what I have seen as far!

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